UGH...T.T
This has got to be one of the worst pieces of flash I have ever seen. And if you want to know why I gave you such a low score on this, I'll tell you why:
First off is the rating. You said that this movie was suitable for ALL audiences, and yet there's bad things to kids, such as smoking and bad words. In other words, you were being a bad influence back there. You could have at LEAST made this suitable for TEENS! T.T
And for the second thing, I'll give you some advice: USE ORIGINAL CHARACTERS! Think of it, man! If you use more original characters, then your flash would become more popular, which would be a good thing to you! Ever thought of that?
I'm not being mean or offensive to you or anything, but if you take my advice, you could make better flash.